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1. Since my major is horticulture we learn about plants and flowers.
When I make design using the flowers I could be affectionate.
Because flower as the same as the human so I had do make careful likewise baby.
If I don't do that my design might be reflect to bad feel.
That's why I like this subject
2. I had worked in service field when I was freshman.
After I have been worked in academy since just a few months ago.
I taught to primary of children about just basic English.
Even though I taught them I was able to enhance my working experience thanks to the children.
Oh, There is limit so i coudn't write anymore Christine ㅠㅠ
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1. Since my major is horticulture we learn about plants and flowers.
>>Since my major is Horticulture, we are learning about plants and flowers.When I make design using the flowers I could be affectionate.
>>When I am making flower arrangements, I do it in an affectionate way.Because flower as the same as the human so I had do make careful likewise baby.
>>Because flowers are the same as humans, I have to be careful for it just like caring for a baby.If I don't do that my design might be reflect to bad feel.
>>If I won’t do that, my design might reflect badly.
<<If I won’t do that, my design might have a bad reflection.That's why I like this subject>>Correct!2. I had worked in service field when I was freshman.
>>I have worked in the service field when I was a freshman.After I have been worked in academy since just a few months ago.
>> After that, I worked in the academy just a few months ago.I taught to primary of children about just basic English.
>>I taught basic English to primary school children.Even though I taught them I was able to enhance my working experience thanks to the children.>>I was able to enhance my working experience when I taught them, thanks to the children.Oh, There is limit so i coudn't write anymore Christine ㅠㅠ
>>Oh, There’s a limited space, so I couldn’t write anymore, Christine.
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