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2011-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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1. Since my major is horticulture we learn about plants and flowers. When I make design using the flowers I could be affectionate. Because flower as the same as the human so I had do make careful likewise baby. If I don't do that my design might be reflect to bad feel. That's why I like this subject 2. I had worked in service field when I was freshman. After I have been worked in academy since just a few months ago. I taught to primary of children about just basic English. Even though I taught them I was able to enhance my working experience thanks to the children. Oh, There is limit so i coudn't write anymore Christine ㅠㅠ

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[이름]!! Thank you so much for sending your composition. I really appreciate your effort. Keep up the good work! ~ Thanks! 1. Since my major is horticulture we learn about plants and flowers. >>Since my major is Horticulture, we are learning about plants and flowers.When I make design using the flowers I could be affectionate. >>When I am making flower arrangements, I do it in an affectionate way.Because flower as the same as the human so I had do make careful likewise baby. >>Because flowers are the same as humans, I have to be careful for it just like caring for a baby.If I don't do that my design might be reflect to bad feel. >>If I won’t do that, my design might reflect  badly. <<If I won’t do that, my design might have a bad reflection.That's why I like this subject>>Correct!2. I had worked in service field when I was freshman. >>I have worked in the service field when I was a freshman.After I have been worked in academy since just a few months ago. >> After that, I worked in the academy just a few months ago.I taught to primary of children about just basic English. >>I taught basic English to primary school children.Even though I taught them I was able to enhance my working experience thanks to the children.>>I was able to enhance my working experience when I taught them, thanks to the children.Oh, There is limit so i coudn't write anymore Christine ㅠㅠ >>Oh, There’s a limited space, so I couldn’t write anymore, Christine.

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