good night
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I received your composition. Thank you so much for your time and effort in writing. I made some corrections with your composition. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made.
Anyway, enjoy your day! Take care always.
before i will sleep , i am writing it
>> I write before going to sleep,
i listened my recorded file !
>> I listened to my recorded file.
i am very beginner so shy about my skill
>> I feel shy about my skill because I’m a beginner.
i think i have to study more hard than now
>> I think I have to study harder.
>> I think I have to study more.
anyway ,i have to go to bed
>> Anyway, I have to go to bed now.
and wake up at 6A.m tomorrow
>> I need to wake up at 6 am tomorrow.
good night!
>> Correct.
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