Good night teacher~!

2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening teacher~! I am really happy to see you Anyway i really liked our topic today:) I will tell you about my school policy First, about make up and clothes My school allow to make up face , eyebrow and lips but we don't allow eyemake up And about clothes they always tell the girls You are skirt is too short Also wearing earing, neckless and rings are not allow I am so sorry teacher tomorrow i have to wake up at 6:30 So i have to go to bed early i am sorry:( I will tell you more about it tomorrow see you tomorrow~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good evening!
You are such a very diligent student...

Thank you so much for always doing your homework and most specially doing your best in our class.

I am always happy to talk with you baby!
I am looking forward to hearing your voice again.

Take care and have a good night baby!
I love you!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^


Good evening teacher~!

>>correct
I am really happy to see you

>>correct
Anyway I really liked our topic today:)

>>correct

I will tell you about my school policy 

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 First, about make up and clothes

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My school allow to make up face , eyebrow and lips but we don\'t

>>My school allows us to wear make up in our eye brows and lips.

allow eyemake up

>>But they won\'t allow us to wear eye shadows.

And about clothes they always tell the girls

>>correct
 You are skirt is too short 

>>Your skirt is too short.

Also wearing earing, neckless and rings are not allow

>>They won\'t allow wearing jewelries like earing, necklace and rings.
 I am so sorry teacher tomorrow I have to wake up at 6:30

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So i have to go to bed early I am sorry:(

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I will tell you more about it tomorrow see you tomorrow~!

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