Good Night Tina~

2012-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Hello~ I'm James. Now is 10'o clock of night. I just finished my part time job. Today's work was boring. Because, little customer visited our restaurant. I was not tired but I worried about my boss. ㅠㅠ I want to cheer up for my boss. Anyway here is my homework. A)From questions in the simple past. 1. When did you watch the film? 2. The dog tun after cat. B) Use the verb in the simple past. 1. I listened. 2. They worked. C) Negate the given sentence. 1. We didn't run to three house. 2. Phil didn't take to his parrot. Teacher I will not be able to attend my Wednesday class. Because I will have to go Busan in Thursday. So I will not able to go my part time job Thursday and Friday. So I will have to work all day long in Wednesday. I'll start my work 9'o clock in the morning. But I will able to attend Thursday class. So see you Thursday~ Good night!

강사 첨삭

Good Morning James!! 

I hope that you are having a good time where ever you are right now. Enjoy your time with your family and friends. I really admire you for letting me know about your good activities. Yes! please keep that kind of behavior so I will be aware of our classes. And please remember, whenever you wanted to change your class time, to change your contact number or maybe when you want to cancel or be absent during your class, always call our Korean manager so they can help you about it! 

I am so happy too knowing that you are so concern about your boss. Don\'t worry there are really days that you will experience having few customers to drop by. It;s just part of the business. It\'s a way for the management to think something creative to attract more customers. 

Take care James, See you tomorrow!! Keep up the good work!! ^^ 

~~~T.Tina~~~

Hello~ I\'m James.

Now is 10\'o clock of night.

>>>It\'s already 10 o\'clock in the evening. 

I just finished my part time job. Today\'s work was boring.

>>>Correct!

Because, little customer visited our restaurant.

>>>Because only a few customers visited our restaurant. 

I was not tired but I worried about my boss.

>>>I wasn\'t tired but I am worried about my boss. 

ㅠㅠ I want to cheer up for my boss.

>>>I want to cheer him up!
Anyway here is my homework.

>>>Correct! 
A)From questions in the simple past.
1. When did you watch the film?

>>>Correct! 
 2. The dog run after cat.

>>>Correct!
B) Use the verb in the simple past.
1. I listened.

>>>Correct! 
2. They worked.

>>>Correct! 
C) Negate the given sentence.
1. We didn\'t run to three house.

>>>Correct! 
2. Phil didn\'t take to his parrot.

>>>Phil didn\'t take his parrot. 
Teacher I will not be able to attend my Wednesday class.

>>>Correct! 

Because I will have to go Busan in Thursday.

>>>Because I will have to go to Busan on Thursday. 

So I will not able to go my part time job Thursday and Friday.

>>>So I will not be able to attend my part time job this Thursday and Friday. 

So I will have to work all day long in Wednesday.

>>>I will have to work all day long on Wednesday. 

I\'ll start my work 9\'o clock in the morning.

>>>I will start working at 9 o\'clock in the morning. 

But I will able to attend Thursday class. So see you Thursday~ Good night!

>>>Correct!

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