good person

2024-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Many politicians in Korea are not good human inherently. Their personalities are neither respectable nor dignified. They only pursue the suprem authority for themselves , not for people, not for democracy. The representative man is Lee Jae-myung. His thinking and speech are vulgar and mean but he is smart. This is a poison to him and Korean.

강사 첨삭

Ms. [이름]!
I sometimes do not understand most politicians, I cannot say when they are telling the truth or lying. That could be one reason why many people hate politicians because the lack integrity.
see you later.
Aki~


Many politicians in Korea are not good human inherently.
>>> Many politicians in Korea are inherently not good humans.

Their personalities are neither respectable nor dignified.
>>> CORRECT

They only pursue the suprem authority for themselves , not for people, not for democracy.
>>>They only pursue the supreme authority for themselves, not for the people, not for democracy.

The representative man is Lee Jae-myung.
>>> CORRECT

His thinking and speech are vulgar and mean but he is smart.
>>> CORRECT

This is a poison to him and Korean.
>>> This is a poison to him and to Koreans.

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