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Jay,
I heard so much about Jeju Island that I\'m also very curious about that place. If ever given the chance, I\'ll go there.(\",)
~Lynn
In Korea, I think there are many good places to go to enjoy my vacation.
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Before choosing the place, it is important to think about what I want to do in that place.
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If I want to get a rest in that place, I usually go to where few people are, such as camping sites and beaches.
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And if I want to experience something new, I will go where many attractions are.
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I have been many places in Korea, if I choosed the best places for vacation, I would pick the Jeju island.
>> I have been to many places in Korea, if I have to choose the best place for vacation, I would pick Jeju Island.
I have been there so many times and I got good impressions whenever I went there.
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In Jeju island, I enjoyed two types of vacation which is for relaxation and touring.
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Last summer, I went there with my girlfriend and it was my first time to drive, so it was so impressive to me.
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We looked around the Jeju island for 4 days and also got a rest at there. I recommend going to Jeju island if you have a chance to visit Korea.
>> We looked around Jeju island for 4 days and also rested in there. I recommend going to Jeju island if you have a chance to visit Korea.
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