Good show for kids

2021-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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Good show for children have to stir children\'s imagination. In childhood, we have to grow our imagination because this time is the best time because we can grow our imaginary ability this time the most. Then I take some show that good for children. 1. spirited away 2. moana 3. Young prince The same thing in these three movie is not real situation. But they have useful imagination in common.

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Good show for children have to stir children\'s imagination.

>> Good shows for children have to stir their imagination.

In childhood, we have to grow our imagination because this time is the best time because we can grow our imaginary ability this time the most.

>> In childhood, we have to grow our imagination because this is the best time we can expand it.

Then I take some show that good for children.
1. spirited away
2. moana
3. Young prince

>> The following are some shows that are good for children:

1. Spirited Away

2. Moana

3. Young Prince

The same thing in these three movie is not real situation.

>> These three movies are fantasies.

But they have useful imagination in common.

>> They stir the imagination.

Hi, Daniel! The three movies you mentioned here are really good. Kids can learn moral lessons from them.

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