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2019-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I can study all subjects but Language especially like English by myself. It\'s so hard to learn language alone. That\'s why I have to find a good teacher who can lead to enjoy learning English to me. My teacher sharon and I have taken a class for almost more than 5 month. At first I worried about speaking on English. However over time, I feel better and have a little confidence when I speak in English. She always give me feedbacks immediately when I used wrong grammar or words. I couldn\'t remember all of feedbacks which my teacher gave to me but I will write these sentences and speak myself at least one time.

강사 첨삭

Hi John!
I love this composition.
Maybe, it\'s because it\'s about me.^^
Please take note of uncountable nouns.
They can never be written in a plural form.^^
Be careful of subject and verb agreement as well.
~~Teacher Sharon
I can study all subjects but Language especially like English by myself. 
>> I can study all subjects by myself but language, especially English, is not included.
It\'s so hard to learn language alone. 
>> It\'s so hard to learn a language alone. 
That\'s why I have to find a good teacher who can lead to enjoy learning English to me.
>> That\'s why I have to find a good teacher who can inspire me to enjoy learning English.
My teacher sharon and I have taken a class for almost more than 5 month. 
>> My teacher, Sharon, and I have been studying together for more than 5 months. 
At first I worried about speaking on English. 
>> At first, I was worried about speaking in English. 
However over time, I feel better and have a little confidence when I speak in English.
>>However, over time, I\'m feeling better and I have some confidence when I speak in English. 
She always give me feedbacks immediately when I used wrong grammar or words. 
>> She always gives me feedback immediately when I make a grammar or vocabulary mistake.
I couldn\'t remember all of feedbacks which my teacher gave to me but I will write these sentences and speak myself at least one time.
>> I can\'t remember all of the feedback which my teacher gave to me but I will write these sentences and speak them at least one time.

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