Good to talk with you :)

2014-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Debby~ :) Today's class, I almost forgot that you don't have special 'summer' because there is always summer. So it is a mistake to ask you "what's your plan for this summer?". haha.. When I noticed this fact after the class, I couldn't stop to laugh. What the most surprising thing is dozens of typhoon in your country every year. Then there are a lot of damages for a typhoon I guess. We took critical damages from only few typhoon, so I can't imagain how enormous a damage will be in your country. I hope you can safely pass this rainy season as well. Take care! :D <Essay> The luckiest day was when I took a gift from an event. The gift is a movie coupon, so I could watch a free movie. Originally I didn't take part in an event because I didn't think that I would win a prize. But after I won several gifts, I often got to participate in a event.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you for wishing me well all the time. I will be safe this rainy season. I have to or else you won\'t have me as your teacher.hahahah^^ People in my country are already used to this kind of weather and I think it\'s one way for them to work hard enough to build strong houses for their family. Anyway, half of the year is very hot so we look forward to rain also for the plants and animals. You are lucky! I hope you win more prizes in the future.^^ I hope you get to check the corrections. It\'s minor corrections like always. Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi Debby~ :)>> CORRECT OR> Hello Debby^^Today\'s class, I almost forgot that you don\'t have special \'summer\' because there is always summer. >> In today\'s class, I almost forgot that you don\'t have special \'summer\' because it is always summer there.  So it is a mistake to ask you \"what\'s your plan for this summer?\". haha.. >> CORRECT OR> It was not appropriate for me to ask what your plans for summmer are.  When I noticed this fact after the class, I couldn\'t stop to laugh. >> When I noticed this fact after the class, I couldn\'t stop laughing.What the most surprising thing is dozens of typhoon in your country every year. >> What surprised me is the thing about the dozens of typhoons in your country every year. Then there are a lot of damages for a typhoon I guess. >> Then there are a lot of damages from a typhoon I guess.  We took critical damages from only few typhoon, so I can\'t imagain how enormous a damage will be in your country.>>  We took critical damages from only few typhoon, so I can\'t imagine how enormous a damage will it be in your country.I hope you can safely pass this rainy season as well. >> CORRECT OR> I hope that you would surpass this rainy season as well.Take care! :D>> CORRECT OR> Be careful.^^<Essay>The luckiest day was when I took a gift from an event. >> CORRECT OR> I felt very lucky when I got a gift from an event. The gift is a movie coupon, so I could watch a free movie. >> CORRECT OR> I got to watch a free movie because of a coupon. Originally I didn\'t take part in an event because I didn\'t think that I would win a prize. >> CORRECT >> Originally, I don\'t like participating in events because I don\'t think that I\'ll be lucky to get a prize.  But after I won several gifts, I often got to participate in a event. >> CORRECT OR> After a few winnings, I gladly joined some events.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·