good today,
학생이 쓴 원문
hello Joan. how do you do? I am a little of tired. Today is for me very big day. I will want to study Germany newt year. So today I entry my resume in university-international center.
I must ready interview. That's very stressful, but for my next year's plan and happnice pass at that text I do that.
At now I am useing a computer and writting a interview script.
I will very expect today's class. see you night. bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi Minjeong^^
Thanks for sending a composition right in time^^ I'm very well thanks for asking. Knowing that you were tired and you sent this message makes me think you're really on to working things out on your way to a better English. We'll keep you ready with the interview, just keep the right perspective and focus. When you dream, we dream with you and we desire success in your life goals too. You can do great things!^^ Here are the corrections you need to study on.
T'Joan
hello Joan.
>>Hello Joan.
how do you do?
>>How do you do? OR
>> How are you?
>> How are you doing?
I am a little of tired.
>>I am a little tired.
Today is for me very big day.
>>Today is a very big day for me.
I will want to study Germany newt year.
>> I want to study in Germany next year.So today I entry my resume in university-international center.
>>So today, I sent my resume at the University-International Center.I must ready interview.
>>I must be ready for the interview. That's very stressful, but for my next year's plan and happnice pass at that text I do that.
>>That's very stressful, but for my next year's plan, it is my happiness to pass at that test.At now I am useing a computer and writting a interview script.>>Right now I am using the computer and I'm writting an interview script.I will very expect today's class.
>>I will expect a lot in today's class. see you night.
>>See you, good night. bye.
>> Bye.
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