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Hi dear. It was a good class today :) I'm going to write my thought about real wealth of our life. I think we have material weatlh so, we can enjoy comfortable lives. On the other hand, we live poor lives mentally. Many people want to have more things than others. So, if we have enough money, but we can not be satisfied with thing we have. because we compare ourself with those around us continuously. Then we aren't happy. That's why many people have material wealth but they are needy phychologically. I believe that we need to find our own worth. Thank you for reading my composition. I enjoy attending our classes these days. I feel comfortable because of your kindness and softness.

Hello there my dear [이름] :) I really enjoyed reading your composition. It feels good to know that you are enjoying your class with me. See you.  It was a good class today. >>Correct.I'm going to write my thought about real wealth of our life.>> I'm going to write my thoughts about the real wealth of our life.I think we have material weatlh so, we can enjoy comfortable lives. >> I think we have material wealth so we can enjoy a comfortable life.On the other hand, we live poor lives mentally. >> On the other hand, people are poor mentally.Many people want to have more things than others. >> Correct.So, if we have enough money, but we can not be satisfied with thing we have. >> So, even if we have enough money, we are not satisfied with what we have. >> So, even if we have enough money, we are not satisfied with the things that we have.because we compare ourself with those around us continuously. >> Because we ourselves with those aroound us continously. Then we aren't happy. >> Correct.That's why many people have material wealth but they are needy phychologically. >> That is why people who have material wealth are psychologically needy.I believe that we need to find our own worth. >> Correct.Thank you for reading my composition.>> Correct.I enjoy attending our classes these days. >>CorrectI feel comfortable because of your kindness and softness. >>Correct.