Gorgeous woman
학생이 쓴 원문
IU is the celebrity in Korea.
She is the top singer and actress.
When she was in highschool.
A famous university permitted her entrance
Without test.
But she rejected their suggestion.
From the time I liked her.
Her best drama \"Uncle” is my best movie of life.
She gave much money to poor people too.
I think she is very gorgeous people.
강사 첨삭
Happy day, Ms. [이름]ny!
I like the way you answer your homework today, it was full of contents and expressions. Keep up the good work!
By the way, I am also a fan of IU ^^
have a good day ~
have a good day ~
Aki
IU is the celebrity in Korea.
>>> IU is a celebrity in Korea.
>>> IU is one of the famous celebrities in Korea.
She is the top singer and actress.
>>> She is a top singer and actress
>>> She is the top singer and actress in her agency.
When she was in highschool. A famous university permitted her entrance. Without test.
>>> CORRECT!
WRITE THIS WAY>>> When she was in high school, a famous university permitted her entrance without a test.
But she rejected their suggestion.
>>> CORRECT!
From the time I liked her.
>>> From that time on, I liked her.
Her best drama \"Uncle” is my best movie of life.
>>> Her drama \"Uncle\"/ Mister\" is the best drama/movie of life.
She gave much money to poor people too.
>>> She gave a lot of money to poor people too.
I think she is very gorgeous people.
>>> I think she is a very gorgeous person.
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