Goryeo University

2017-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I went to Goryeo University today.Goryeo University was really big.I took a photo many times.There is a law school,english scool,and Korean School. Samsung and LG and Sk builded buildings for student.Goryeo University was builted in 1905.It has 112years history.I ate sausage,rice,some dish,chicken soup,juice,homerun ball at te cafeteria. After eating lunch my homeroom teacher gave me a homework.It was asking how can study well.My team asked 6students.My classmate and homeroom teacher went to home by subway and bus.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


That\'s why you didn\'t want to share about your field trip in class.

You are going to share it here. ^^ 

Anyway, thank you for the information about Goryeo University.

Have a good night!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


I went to Goryeo University today.

>> correct

Goryeo University was really big.

>> Goryeo University is really big.

I took a photo many times.

>> I took a lot of photos.

There is a law school,english scool,and Korean School. Samsung and LG and Sk builded buildings for student.

>> There are different schools. There is a Law, English, and Korean school. Samsung, LG, and SK built buildings for the students.

Goryeo University was builted in 1905.

>> Goryeo University was built in 1905.

It has 112years history.

>> It has been 112 years since it was built.

I ate sausage,rice,some dish,chicken soup,juice,homerun ball at te cafeteria.

>> I ate rice and some dishes like sausages, homerun ball, chicken soup, and juice at the cafeteria.
 After eating lunch my homeroom teacher gave me a homework.

>> correct

It was asking how can study well.

>> It was asking how can someone study well.

My team asked 6students.

>> My team asked 6 students.

My classmate and homeroom teacher went to home by subway and bus.

>> My classmate and homeroom teacher went home by subway and bus.

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