Goryeo University
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Hi, [이름]!
That\'s why you didn\'t want to share about your field trip in class.
You are going to share it here. ^^
Anyway, thank you for the information about Goryeo University.
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I went to Goryeo University today.
>> correct
Goryeo University was really big.
>> Goryeo University is really big.
I took a photo many times.
>> I took a lot of photos.
There is a law school,english scool,and Korean School. Samsung and LG and Sk builded buildings for student.
>> There are different schools. There is a Law, English, and Korean school. Samsung, LG, and SK built buildings for the students.
Goryeo University was builted in 1905.
>> Goryeo University was built in 1905.
It has 112years history.
>> It has been 112 years since it was built.
I ate sausage,rice,some dish,chicken soup,juice,homerun ball at te cafeteria.
>> I ate rice and some dishes like sausages, homerun ball, chicken soup, and juice at the cafeteria.
After eating lunch my homeroom teacher gave me a homework.
>> correct
It was asking how can study well.
>> It was asking how can someone study well.
My team asked 6students.
>> My team asked 6 students.
My classmate and homeroom teacher went to home by subway and bus.
>> My classmate and homeroom teacher went home by subway and bus.
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