Gossiping
학생이 쓴 원문
Gossiping with friends is very funny thing.
I enjoy gossiping with my friends. We usually talk about our study
or famous TV program or famous singer . And we also talk about
our teacher. About his personality or his teaching style.
We sometimes blame teacher or tease him.
I think gossiping with friends is a very usefull thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Hmm, indeed, gossip is one delicious habit that all sorts of people cannot get rid of, kk. Perhaps we can just reflect at times on the effects brought by it to people whose actions cannot easily be justified by the mere act of gossip, =). See you in class and have a nice time!
T. May
Gossiping with friends is very funny thing.
>>> Gossiping with friends is a very fun thing.
I enjoy gossiping with my friends.
>>> Correct
We usually talk about our study or famous TV program or famous singer .
>>> We usually talk about our studies or about a famous TV program or a famous singer.
And we also talk aboutour teacher.
>>> And we also talk about our teachers.
About his personality or his teaching style.
>>> We talk about e ach teacher's personality or his teaching style.
We sometimes blame teacher or tease him.
>>> We sometimes blame our teacher or we tease him.
I think gossiping with friends is a very usefull thing.
>>> I think gossiping with friends is a very useful thing.
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