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I think the government should restrict going place like amusement park, department store more more hardly than before. It will help reducing corona virus infection
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That\'s actually a good idea. This can really lessen the number of COVID-19 cases.
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I think the government should restrict going place like amusement park, department store more more hardly than before.
>> I think the government should restrict going place like amusement parks, department stores, and more hardly than before
It will help reducing corona virus infection
>> It will help reduce the number of people getting infected of the virus.
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