Government must take responsibility to young people.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Government supports to educationg young people.
because, young people is the future of the nation.
so government invest to young people education that basic,advanced class..
If Government don;t take them to became a poor country.
Government must take responsibility to young people.
강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think Government supports to educationg young people.
>>> I think the government has to support the education of young people.
Because, young people is the future of the nation.
Because, young people is the future of the nation.
>>> CORRECT!
so government invest to young people education that basic,advanced class..
>>> So the government should invest in young people\'s education such as basic or advanced class..
If Government don;t take them to became a poor country.
If Government don;t take them to became a poor country.
>>> If the government won\'t consider them then we would become a poor country.
Government must take responsibility to young people.
Government must take responsibility to young people.
>>> The government must take the responsibility for young people.
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