Grace teacher ^0^

2012-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Hello, teacher. Good evening ~ It's cold here our contry. so I am wearing my padding at home. And today is Friday. It's the last day of week. We can take a rest ^^~ I'm so happy :) I think you are, too. I always thank you. Because you always wait for me to tell my opinions. So I can tell you without difficulty. Thank you so much. >3< and It is very short time to talk about everything us. Grace teacher Have a nice weekend and take a rest please ^^♡ See you on Monday Good night ~ P.S) When you go to shoes shops, you will buy wonderful your husband's shoes surely.

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Hi Mia! WOW! Thank you for this composition. I was about to go home but it\'s great that I still had the chance to read this before I go. ^^ Thank you Mia for saying wonderful things about me. Words are not enough to show my gratitude for being your teacher. I will be really envious on your next teacher but I am still happy because I\'ve had amazing memories with you. See you in two days Mia, take care! Cheerios! teacher GRACE teacher. Good evening ~ >> Correct >> Hello teacher! Good evening! It\'s cold here our contry. so I am wearing my padding at home. >> It\'s cold in our country now so I am wearing clothes with pads at home.And today is Friday. It\'s the last day of week. >> Today is Friday, tha last day of the week. (Saturday and/or Sunday are the last days of the week that\'s why those days fall on the weekend.)We can take a rest ^^~ I\'m so happy :) I think you are, too.>> CorrectI always thank you. Because you always wait for me to tell my opinions.>> I am always thankful to you because you always wait for me to express my opinions. So I can tell you without difficulty. Thank you so much. >3< >> I can speak without difficulty, Thank you so much. and It is very short time to talk about everything us.>>  Our class time is too short that it\'s not enough to talk about everything about the two of us.Grace teacher Have a nice weekend and take a rest please ^^♡ >> Teacher Grace, have a nice weekend and take a rest please.See you on Monday Good night ~ >> Correct >> Better: See you on Monday, good night. (Observe proper punctuation marks.)P.S) When you go to shoes shops, you will buy wonderful your husband\'s shoes surely. >>  P.S. >> When you go to the shoe store, I think you will choose wonderful pairs of shoes for your husband for sure.

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