graduated from dawwon elementary school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi there^^

Wow! Those were a lot of spaces for you to say goodbye.^^

Congratulations on your graduation day. It is indeed a happy day for you.^^

I\'m sure that your Mom and Dad are very proud of you. I guess you played a lot as a celebration. ^^

You did a good job with your sentences today. I just want you to be very careful with spellings and proper nouns that should be capitalized.

Practice using the proper tenses of your verbs especially for your future and past tenses.

Take care^^

T. Chloe

Here are some of my corrections for you:

I\'m graduated from dawwon elementary school!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>> I graduated from Dawwon Elementary School!^^
My feel was very good.

>> I feel very good.
At graduation ceremony my mother and father give thanks to me.

>> At the graduation ceremony my Mother and Father told me they are thankful.
I\'m very good.

>> CORRECT

OR> I did a great job.
I will go to the middle school at march third.

>> I will be attending middle school on March 3rd.^^
I play very hard yestarday with my friend.
>> I played a lot yesterday with my friend.^^
GOOD BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>> GOODBYE!!!^^