Graduation
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, 6th graders graduated elementary school. 5th grade's class and vice presidents need to go there and sing graduation songs and clap for them. It took 1hour and 15 minutes. I don't need to sing songs and clap for them because I need to work in the broadcasting room. This time, I needed to change songs, not only graduation songs. There were 14 songs! Then I checked the mikes and changed the volume at that time. Also, I can the mike sound too! This was terrific!! 2 just did nothing and 2 checked 2 cameras. The last one couldn't work because he was a vice school president so he needed to say some words to 6th graders who go to middle school.
Even though I was very hard, I was very interesting
강사 첨삭
Hi Joey,
Seems like you had a good day at school. You got your first experience being in a broadcasting team. Talk to you again tomorrow.
-RJ
Today, 6th graders graduated elementary school. >>Today, the 6th graders graduated from elementary school.
5th grade's class and vice presidents need to go there and sing graduation songs and clap for them.
>>correct
It took 1hour and 15 minutes. I don't need to sing songs and clap for them because I need to work in the broadcasting room.
>>correct
This time, I needed to change songs, not only graduation songs. There were 14 songs! Then I checked the mikes and changed the volume at that time.
>>This time, I needed to change songs, not only graduation songs. There were 14 songs! Then I checked the mics and changed their volume at that time.
Also, I can the mike sound too! This was terrific!! 2 just did nothing and 2 checked 2 cameras.
>>Also, I can test the mic too! This was terrific!! 2 students just did nothing and 2 other students checked the 2 cameras.
The last one couldn't work because he was a vice school president so he needed to say some words to 6th graders who go to middle school.
>>The last one couldn't work because he was a vice president of the school, so he needed to say some words to the 6th graders who are going to middle school.
Even though I was very hard, I was very interesting
>>The last one couldn't work because he was a vice president of the school, so he needed to say some words to the 6th graders who are going to middle school.
Even though I was very hard, I was very interesting
>>Even though I had a hard time, it was very interesting.
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