Graduation Ceremony

2011-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Today, I attended my friends's graduation ceremony. I took many photos with them and ate lunch with some of them. My friends and I have been a friend since 2006 when I entranced in my college. I feel that it is not for a long time but it has been already for 5 years. When we were freshmen, we listened to the same classes together and hung around near the college everyday night. We studied together and went camp for our membership. From now on, we can't meet frequently and they'll busy because of their works. I'll be missing them. Also, I expected my graduation next year. I want to know that who will come to my graduation ceremony and how I feel at that time.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Min Joo! College life is really fun! But there would always come a time that you won’t be able to do those things that you always do with your friends. It’s sad, but I know you’ll be alright. Cheer up my dear.. God bless, T. Faye   Here are your corrections: Today, I attended my friends's graduation ceremony. >> CORRECT I took many photos with them and ate lunch with some of them. >>CORRECT  My friends and I have been a friend since 2006 when I entranced in my college. >> My Friends and I have been friends since 2006 when I entered college. I feel that it is not for a long time but it has been already for 5 years. >> I feel that it hasn’t been a long time but it’s been 5 years.  When we were freshmen, we listened to the same classes together and hung around near the college everyday night. >> When we were freshmen, we had the same classes together and hang around near the college every night. We studied together and went camp for our membership. >> We studied and went to camp for our membership together.From now on, we can't meet frequently and they'll busy because of their works. From now on, we can’t meet very often and they’ll be busy with their job. I'll be missing them. >> CORRECT Also, I expected my graduation next year. >> Also, I’m expecting to graduate next year. I want to know that who will come to my graduation ceremony and how I feel at that time. >> I want to know who will attend my graduation and how will feel that time.

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