grammar
학생이 쓴 원문
yes i can. I can play without a smart phone. I can play with my friends, play the piano, and practice some math homework.
and also There is a lot of board games in my house. SO i can leave without of smart phone.
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yes i can. I can play without a smart phone.
>>> Yes, I can play without using my smartphone.
I can play with my friends, play the piano, and practice some math homework.
>>> I can play with my friends, play the piano, and practice how to solve my math homework.
and also There is a lot of board games in my house. SO i can leave without of smart phone.
>>> I also have a lot of board games in the house so I can live without using my smartphone.
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