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I like to ride a merr go around because It has carriage shape riding, horse shape riding . so i can ride beautiful riding. and I can take a beautiful picture with a merry go around.
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I like to ride a merr go around because It has carriage shape riding, horse shape riding . so i can ride beautiful riding. and I can take a beautiful picture with a merry go around.
>>> I would like to ride a Merry Go Round because it has a carriage where you can ride.
And you can ride at the back of the house like chairs.
Aside from that, it\'s a perfect place for taking a good picture.
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