Grammar

Hi Maria! ^^

A wonderful evening ^^

Thank you so much for taking time in correcting your slips in grammar. I really appreciate that

even if you\'re busy from work, you still find time to practice send me this composition.

Keep it up^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

1. I have a massage and went to the meeting for my son\'s university.
>>> Yesterday I received a massage and went to a group of mothers of my son’s college frineds
>> Yesterday, I had a massage and attended a meeting of mothers of my son\'s friends.
2. Many North Korean don\'t know this incidence.
>>> Many North Koreans don’t know this incident.
>> Correct
3. in the Malaysia.
>>> in Malaysia.
>> Correct
4. He is going to university of Oxford.
>>> He is going to go th Oxford University.
>> He is going to attend Oxford University.
5. He want only to love long with his son.
>>> He want to live a long time with his son.
>> He wants to live a long life with his son.
6. His son is danger.
>>> His son is also in danger.
>> Correct
7. Kim Jong-nam is exile China a long time.
>>>He Lived in exile in China for a long time.
>> He was exiled to China for a long time.

 8. Many North Korean people will be angry to Kim Jong-un.
>>> Many North Koreans are angry with Kim Jong un
>> Correct
9. Many North Korean
>>> Many North Koreans
>> Correct

or

>>> A lot of North Koreans...

 10. South Korea is welcome to North Korean people. 
 >>> South Koreans welcomed the North Koreans
>> North Koreans are welcome to South Korea.
11. Yes, very really pity.
>>> Yes, they’re very really pity

>> Yes, I really pity them.

or

>>> Yes, they are really a pity.