Grammer

2017-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

■ Grammar Please take note of the following grammar errors: 1. Today I have achieved my plan. >>>Today I achieved my plan. 2. My time is time schedule. >>> My plan is according to time schedule. 3. working in job and study English... >>> I worked at work, studied English, inquired after my father-in-law, and visited my in-laws. 4. Lying needed to consider the other man. >>> Lying is needed to consider the other people. 5. Do not harm. >>> It will not harm. 6. Most of people have to tell the truth. >>> Most people should tell the truth. 7. Many people think they do not have lie. >>> Many people think they don’t lie. 8. Because he say... >>> because he said. 9. I don't want to they stressful. >>> I don’t want them to feel stressed. 10. They unnecessary conflict affect their... >>> The unnecessary conflicts won’t make them decrepit.

강사 첨삭

A great evening Maria, ^^


Thank you so much for doing your homework...

I really appreciate your time and effort in doing so.

Two thumbs up for a job well done.

Looking forward to hearing your voice again.

Take care always and have a great night!


Teacher Glenda



Here are my corrections:

Please take note of the following grammar errors:
1. Today I have achieved my plan.
>>>Today I achieved my plan.
>> Correct


 2. My time is time schedule.
>>> My plan is according to time schedule.
>> Correct


 3. working in job and study English...
>>> I worked at work, studied English, inquired after my father-in-law, and visited my in-laws.
>> I worked, studied English, inquired about my father-in-law and visited them.


 4. Lying needed to consider the other man.
>>> Lying is needed to consider the other people.
>> Lying is needed to consider other people.


 5. Do not harm.
>>> It will not harm.
>> Correct


 6. Most of people have to tell the truth.
>>> Most people should tell the truth.
>> Correct


 7. Many people think they do not have lie.
>>> Many people think they don’t lie.
>> Correct


 8. Because he say...
>>> because he said.
>> Correct


 9. I don\'t want to they stressful.
>>> I don’t want them to feel stressed.
>> Correct

or

>> I don\'t want them to be stressed.


 10. They unnecessary conflict affect their...
>>> The unnecessary conflicts won’t make them decrepit.

>> Correct

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