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I need a grammertical correction for followed stentences. Check please. 01 I underwent hard time in my master's degree because I couldn't understand university culture and their languages. Then, how was it about the doctoral course? It was little bit better. However, I felt that I could die when I wrote the master's thesis. 02 The cold hands giving the letter without a word. The touching letter with traces of tear. 03 Let's eat and play at Friday and Saturday night! If you charge breackfast, lunch or dinner with Lotte credit card... 04 'We are family 'radio show with the blind DJ Lee Young-ho. September ninth, Monday's first song is sung by Blondie. 'call me' 05 The play 'scandal' has been presented at A Art Hall. This play shows a thrilling story about scandal among five women and men. If you want to get a chance to see this play, pelase send a answer of the quiz with the title 'scandal'.

Hi there [이름]!How are you doing now? I guess you\'re still sleeping. Anyway, thank you for sending this composition. I just noticed a lot of flaws so you have to study the correction provided below. Try to learn more about the proper use of prepositions and articles. Anyway, I\'ll discuss this with you later! Thank you and have a great morning! Keep safe! ~~ T. Abby ~~ I need a grammertical correction for followed stentences. >> I need a grammatical correction for the following sentences: OR> I need your correction for the following sentences: Check please. >> Please check.  01I underwent hard time in my master\'s degree because I couldn\'t understand university culture and their languages. >> I had a hard time in my master\'s degree because I couldn\'t understand the culture and languages in my university. Then, how was it about the doctoral course? >> Then how about the doctoral course? It was little bit better. >> Correct    However, I felt that I could die when I wrote the master\'s thesis. >> However, I felt like dying while I was writing my master\'s thesis. 02The cold hands giving the letter without a word. >> Correct   The touching letter with traces of tear. -> The touching letter was with traces of tears.  03Let\'s eat and play at Friday and Saturday night! >> Let\'s eat and play on Friday and Saturday  night! If you charge breackfast, lunch or dinner with Lotte credit card... >> If you accept payment for the meal by Lotte credit card ____. OR> If you accept Lotte credit card for the charged meal ____. 04\'We are family \'radio show with the blind DJ Lee Young-ho. >> \'We are Family\' is the radio show hosted by the blind DJ, Lee Young-ho. September ninth, Monday\'s first song is sung by Blondie. \'call me\' >> Blondie sang her first song \'Call Me\' on Monday, September ninth. OR> On Monday, September ninth, Blondie sang her first song entitled \'Call Me\'. 05The play \'scandal\' has been presented at A Art Hall. >> The play \'Scandal\' has been presented at the Art Hall. This play shows a thrilling story about scandal among five women and men. >> This play shows a thrilling story about a scandal of five women and men. If you want to get a chance to see this play, pelase send a answer of the quiz with the title \'scandal\'. >> If you want to get a chance to see this play, please send an answer to the quiz entitled as \'Scandal\'.