Grammer Correction
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Emily!
The movie is sad but I know it has a lot of lessons we can learn and apply to our own. Our country was once occupied by the Japanese as well. It happened a long time ago, but we still remember those people who sacrificed their lives for our country. Thank you for sharing about the movie.
~ Teacher Josephine~
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If I didn\'t register on last Saturday, I will get a penalty.
>> If I didn\'t register last Saturday, I would have gotten a penalty.
We not divide our roles yet.
>> We haven\'t divided our roles yet.
March 1 1919, It occured a peaceful demonstration to resist from Japan.
>> On March 1, 1919, a peaceful demonstration against Japanese occurred.
Many people tool part in the demonstration themselves.
>> Many people too part in the demonstration.
They kept shouting about independence of our country on that day.
>> They shouted for the independence of our country on that day.
They are killed and hurt and imprisoned.
>> They were killed, hurt and imprisoned.
The movie showa a woman\'s prision life.
>> The movie showed a woman\'s prison\'s life
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