grandmother

2014-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I can't visitd my grandmother's house. My mother feel bad when i visited my grandmother's house. because i'm not study in grandmother house. And i watch television almost time. I doesn't like study in grandmother house. I want to play all time in grandmother house. My mother doesn't like go to my grand mother's house that reasons

강사 첨삭

Oh no! What did you do Mike? You should have studied in there. If I were your mother, I would the same thing. I won\'t allow you going there anymore. Mothers know best Mike so you always have to obey your mother. Study hard! Anyway, have a good night. -Teacher Chloe I can\'t visitd my grandmother\'s house. >>I cannot visit my grandmother\'s house again. My mother feel bad when i visited my grandmother\'s house. because i\'m not study in grandmother house >>My mother felt bad because I didn\'t study there. >>My mother felt bad because I didn\'t study at my grandmother\'s house..And i watch television almost time. >>Most of the time, I watched the television.I doesn\'t like study in grandmother house. >>I don\'t like studying there. >>I don\'t like studying at my grandmother\'s house. I want to play all time in grandmother house. >>I just want to play there. >>I just want to play at my grandmother\'s house.My mother doesn\'t like go to my grand mother\'s house that reasons >>My mother doesn\'t like me going to grandmother\'s house because of these reasons.

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