grandmother's house

2014-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I visited mygrandmother's house.. I watched television in mygrandmother's house. I very good. I thought watched television is very good. My favorite hobby is that work,

강사 첨삭

Oh Mike! So, you went to your grandmother\'s house today. What did your mom tell you? I think the last time you went there, she scolded you. Yes, watching TV is just alright but spending too much time on it is unhealthy. Also, you need to do your homework first before doing it. Study first. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your night Mike. -Teacher Chloe I visited mygrandmother\'s house.. >>I visited my grandmother\'s house. >>I visited my grandmother\'s home.I watched television in mygrandmother\'s house. >>I watched the television at my grandmother\'s house.I very good. >>It was very good.I thought watched television is very good. >>I think watching the television is very good. >>I think watching TV is very good. My favorite hobby is that work, >>My favorite hobby is watching TV. >>My favorite hobby is watching the television.

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