Grandparents

2016-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My grandparents are really nice and very kind. When I go to my grandparents house at the end they give us some money. grandparents buy everything if you say what you want. My grandparents are really kind. They make some delicous food and nice snack so I love my grandparents. My family goes to grandparents house at very special events or day. At the new year and I went to my grandpartens huse and it was great.

강사 첨삭

Hi Min! Happy Monday! Happy 2016!^^   Thank you so much for this composition. I\'ve read it well. I\'m quite envious since I don\'t remember spending much time with my grandparents. Unlike you, you can still creative fun, good memories with them. Be good to them, okay?:) See you in class!   =T. Mayleen=     My grandparents are really nice and very kind. >> My grandparents are really nice and kind. When I go to my grandparents house at the end they give us some money. >> Whenever I go to my grandparents\' house, they\'d give us money. grandparents buy everything if you say what you want. >> They\'d buy everything you say. My grandparents are really kind. >> CORRECTt! They make some delicous food and nice snack so I love my grandparents. >> They prepare delicious food so I love them. My family goes to grandparents house at very special events or day. >> My family goes to grandparents\' houses during special days. At the new year and I went to my grandpartens huse and it was great. >> I went to my grandparents\' house for New Year and it was great.

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