Grandparents don\'t have to live alone
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, grandparents don\'t have to live alone. Though these days, usual family consists of parents, and children. But, in the past most of grandparents live with parents, and children. So I think grandparents can live with their children these days. Just usually family live without grandparents, we can live with our grandparents.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! Thanks for doing your homework. However, your thoughts need more organization. Please practice more.
- Teacher Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
Though these days, usual family consists of parents, and children.
>> However, these days a family usually consists of parents and children.
But, in the past most of grandparents live with parents, and children. So I think grandparents can live with their children these days.
>> In the past, most grandparents lived with their children and grandchildren, so I think they can live with them these days.
Just usually family live without grandparents, we can live with our grandparents.
>> It is usual for families to live without the grandparents, but we can still live with them.
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