Gravity

2016-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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We can stay on the ground in Earth because Earth has lot's of gravity. Moon has less gravity than the Earth so when people arrive in moon they wore a special suit so they won't be wondering around the space. Newton is the first sicencetist who discover the gravity. He discoverd by the apple drop off the apple trees. If there was no gravity in Earths the things and the people and everything will be floating

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Hello MIN!^_^   Wow! This time we\'re talking about gravity. You\'re really an interesting buddy. You talk about saving water, trees, energy, and now it\'s gravity. Thank you for this composition, Min. I\'ve read it well. I\'ll see you in class.   ~T. Mayleen~   We can stay on the ground in Earth because Earth has lot\'s of gravity. >> The Earth\'s gravity pulls you back down to the ground. Moon has less gravity than the Earth so when people arrive in moon they wore a special suit so they won\'t be wondering around the space. >> The Moon has lesser gravity than Earth that\'s why astronauts wear special suits so they won\'t be wandering around the space. Newton is the first sicencetist who discover the gravity. >> Newton is the first scientist to discover gravity. He discoverd by the apple drop off the apple trees. >> He learned about it when an apple fell down from the apple tree. If there was no gravity in Earths the things and the people and everything will be floating >> If there\'s no gravity, everything including people would float off ito the atmosphere.

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