Gray for the Unstable Compromise
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As an engineer, compromised idea is not welcomed in my mind. Engineer use creativity in order to make ideal solution which satisfy both side, such as a steam iron, which has preserved extreme heat and provided safety at once. Gray is a symbol of compromise, and that doesn\'t sounds perfect for me.
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Hello, [이름]. Here are the corrections to your previous homework.
As an engineer, compromised idea is not welcomed in my mind.
>> As an engineer, a compromised idea is not welcome in my mind.
Engineer use creativity in order to make ideal solution which satisfy both side, such as a steam iron, which has preserved extreme heat and provided safety at once.
>> Engineers use creativity in order to make ideal solutions that satisfy both sides, such as a steam iron, which has preserved extreme heat and provided safety at once.
Gray is a symbol of compromise, and that doesn\'t sounds perfect for me.
>> Gray is a symbol of compromise, and that doesn\'t sound perfect to me.
As an engineer, compromised idea is not welcomed in my mind.
>> As an engineer, a compromised idea is not welcome in my mind.
Engineer use creativity in order to make ideal solution which satisfy both side, such as a steam iron, which has preserved extreme heat and provided safety at once.
>> Engineers use creativity in order to make ideal solutions that satisfy both sides, such as a steam iron, which has preserved extreme heat and provided safety at once.
Gray is a symbol of compromise, and that doesn\'t sounds perfect for me.
>> Gray is a symbol of compromise, and that doesn\'t sound perfect to me.
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