Great Monday.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. Lei~
did you have a fantastic weekend? to me, yes, i did. let's talk about it at our class. ^ ^ until yesterday. i didn't have a plan to study English. it means i studied without any sysmastic plan. i studied without exact goal. but after i read a book about English studying. i realized that i didn't study without study plan so i couldn't promote well. so i decide to make a study plan. actually i will follow the way which the suggetion of that i read. the book told me to master English i need to endvear in 1000 hours. and it gives sysmastic plan. i will follow the way. how about your tinking? is it good way to improve my skill in English?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That’s really interesting. You know what, the author has a point. How could you succeed at something if you don’t have a specific goal for it. Yeah, I guess it’s okay for you to follow and apply what you have red. Only you can actually decide on it. Just always remember that I am here to help you reaching your goals in regards with your English comprehension skills.
Lei J
Good morning. Lei~>>correctdid you have a fantastic weekend?
>>correct
to me, yes, i did.
>>I had a great weekend.
let's talk about it at our class. ^ ^
>>let’s talk about during our class
until yesterday. i didn't have a plan to study English.
>>I didn’t have any program upon studying English, not until yesterday
it means i studied without any sysmastic plan.
>>It means that I don’t have a systematic plan with studying english
i studied without exact goal.
>>I studied without a goal
but after i read a book about English studying. i realized that i didn't study without study plan so i couldn't promote well.
>>But after reading a book, I realized that I couldn’t improve my English skills if I don’t have a certain goal
so i decide to make a study plan.
>>So I decided to make a study plan
actually i will follow the way which the suggetion of that i read.
>>Actually, I will strictly follow the plan according to the book
the book told me to master English i need to endear in 1000 hours.
>>The book stated that in order to master English, I need to endure 1000 hours
and it gives sysmastic plan.
>>and it stated a systematic plan
i will follow the way.
>>I will follow it
how about your tinking?
>>What do you think?
is it good way to improve my skill in English?
>>Is it a good way of improving my English skills?
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