greed

what is greed? A greed is mind to have more. We can try to have more than now, but greed is overmind. What do you think can greed do to your life? I can greed many things, are all of world. Especially I have a my good house. I still live with my parents. and I want a money, and a good job, and a peace and a dog, etc. but I think I can't and enough now. I thanks god. however, My enternship salary is very short. Ha Ha! Are you greedy? My boyfriend spoke to me you are greedy for work. So I thought my back life, it's really right. Now I regret what I did, I am trying to thinking about my familly, boyfriend, friends than work. ... I confused to direction of answer over homework. Thank you~ Merry christmas~!

Hello! I enjoyed reading your composition and it\'s nice to know your insights about greed and your attitude towards work. Thank you for sharing that to me. I corrected some of your statements. Please do check them out and make them as basis for practice. Happy Holiday! (^_^) -Teacher Faye-  What is greed?A greed is mind to have more. >>Greed is the thinking to have more.We can try to have more than now, but greed is overmind. >>We tend to think that we could have more than we have now and that\'s being greedy.What do you think can greed do to your life? I can greed many things, are all of world. >>I can be greedy when it comes to a lot of things.Especially I have a my good house. >>Especially the want to have my own house.I still live with my parents. >>CORRECTand I want a money, and a good job, and a peace and a dog, etc. >>I want money, good job, a dog and a peaceful life.but I think I can\'t and enough now. >>But I thik I can\'t and I have enough for now.I thanks god. >>I thank God.however, My enternship salary is very short. Ha Ha! >>However, my salary as an intern is very low.Are you greedy? My boyfriend spoke to me you are greedy for work. >>My boyfried told me that I am greedy when it comes to eork.So I thought my back life, it\'s really right. >>So I thought about my past life and realized that he was right.Now I regret what I did, I am trying to thinking about my familly, boyfriend, friends than work.>> Now I regret what I did, and I am trying to think about my familly, boyfriend, and friends than work. ... I confused to direction of answer over homework. >>I got confused with the instruction of my homework.Thank you~ Merry Christmas~! >>CORRECT