greeting
학생이 쓴 원문
When we greet each other, we don\'t with hug or cheek like the west. do.
Maybe this greeting etiqyette related to traditional confucian culture.
Compare to the west, the east are careful physical contact.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Indeed, there are some greeting expressions that we find awkward. I gues greeting should be based on comfortabiity not on culture.
Talk to you later.
T. Aki~
When we greet each other, we don\'t with hug or cheek like the west. do.
>>> When we greet each other, we don\'t do it with a hug or cheek like the West does.
Maybe this greeting etiqyette related to traditional confucian culture.
>>> Maybe this greeting etiquette is related to traditional Confucian culture.
Compare to the west, the east are careful physical contact.
>>> Compared to the West, the east is careful in physical contact.
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