Greeting
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Hello.
I am [Name] [이름] and going to meet you next Monday.
Next Monday is our first class, and I am expecting to see you on the SKYPE.
A month ago, I attended my class at night in Power English.
However, I had to move out to a new house, so I couldn't help to put my class on hold for one month.
Now, my house is closer to my workplace, so I am available to listen to my English class in the morning.
For your reference, my English skill is not good for now, so please teach me well and speak slowly. ^^
Because of my rest for one month, my English skill seems to get worse than before. ^^;;
Anyway, see you next Monday! ^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!^^
First of all, I am grateful to have you in my class. I was really comfortable talking with you and I hope I was able to
make you feel the same way.
Second, I apologize if it was a bit inconvenient calling you late on your mobile phone number. Actually, we are not supposed to call
the students on their mobile number if the student has enrolled a Skype class. Mobile classes and Skype classes have different terms but since
it was our first day and I needed to clarify some things with you, I was allowed to do so. However, it may not be allowed again.
I hope your internet connection will be stable tomorrow so we can have our class on Skype continously.
Nice meeting you once again!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> CorrectHello.
>> CorrectI am Hyunji [이름] and going to meet you next Monday.
>> CorrectNext Monday is our first class, and I am expecting to see you on the SKYPE.
>> Next Monday is our first class/will be our first class and I am expecting to see you on Skype.A month ago, I attended my class at night in Power English.
>> CorrectHowever, I had to move out to a new house, so I couldn\'t help to put my class on hold for one month.
>> CorrectNow, my house is closer to my workplace, so I am available to listen to my English class in the morning. >> Now, my house is closer to my workplace so I am available to have/take my English class in the morning.
For your reference, my English skill is not good for now, so please teach me well and speak slowly. ^^
>> Correct.Because of my rest for one month, my English skill seems to get worse than before. ^^;;
>> Because I took a rest for one month, my English skill seems to get worse than before.Anyway, see you next Monday! ^^
>> Correct.
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