Greeting

2015-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. [Name], Hello. I am [Name] [이름] and going to meet you next Monday. Next Monday is our first class, and I am expecting to see you on the SKYPE. A month ago, I attended my class at night in Power English. However, I had to move out to a new house, so I couldn't help to put my class on hold for one month. Now, my house is closer to my workplace, so I am available to listen to my English class in the morning. For your reference, my English skill is not good for now, so please teach me well and speak slowly. ^^ Because of my rest for one month, my English skill seems to get worse than before. ^^;; Anyway, see you next Monday! ^^

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!^^ First of all, I am grateful to have you in my class. I was really comfortable talking with you and I hope I was able to make you feel the same way. Second, I apologize if it was a bit inconvenient calling you late on your mobile phone number. Actually, we are not supposed to call the students on their mobile number if the student has enrolled a Skype class. Mobile classes and Skype classes have different terms but since it was our first day and I needed to clarify some things with you, I was allowed to do so. However, it may not be allowed again. I hope your internet connection will be stable tomorrow so we can have our class on Skype continously. Nice meeting you once again!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear [Name]. [Name], >> CorrectHello. >> CorrectI am Hyunji [이름] and going to meet you next Monday. >> CorrectNext Monday is our first class, and I am expecting to see you on the SKYPE. >> Next Monday is our first class/will be our first class and I am expecting to see you on Skype.A month ago, I attended my class at night in Power English. >> CorrectHowever, I had to move out to a new house, so I couldn\'t help to put my class on hold for one month. >> CorrectNow, my house is closer to my workplace, so I am available to listen to my English class in the morning. >> Now, my house is closer to my workplace so I am available to have/take my English class in the morning. For your reference, my English skill is not good for now, so please teach me well and speak slowly. ^^ >> Correct.Because of my rest for one month, my English skill seems to get worse than before. ^^;; >> Because I took a rest for one month, my English skill seems to get worse than before.Anyway, see you next Monday! ^^ >> Correct.

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