[greeting]

2011-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

[greeting] - Hello~ How are you? Nice to meet you~ - Fine thank you. and you? - pretty good. Not bad - How's everything? - I feel tired. I need a rest. I need a relaxation. - I am stressed at work. - It's been a long time. - long time no see. - What's new?

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr.Kim!! It was nice to know that you're sending yur composition for me to edit it. Just keep on sending your writing exercise so you could also improve your writing skill. ^^ Take care and talk to you soon then.   [greeting] >> Greetings- Hello~ How are you? Nice to meet you~ >> Correct- Fine thank you. and you? >> Fine thank you. And you?- pretty good. Not bad >> I'm pretty goog. Not bad.- How's everything? >> Correct- I feel tired. I need a rest. I need a relaxation. >> Correct- I am stressed at work. >> Correct- It's been a long time. >> Correct- long time no see. >> Lone time no see.- What's new? >> Correct

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