Greeting kind of annoys me
학생이 쓴 원문
There were peoe to greet physically like hitting other people, verbally making fun of other people in my high school. I really hated them so i ignored them. I think these greeting are bullying. But young boys don’t know about that exactly and they think friendship is the most important to their lifes. But important thing is not being hurt by other people physically, psychologically
강사 첨삭
Good day, Mark! I see, of course there are people who say bad thing about other people. It\'s good that you just ignore them at that time. You are such a good and kind person. Continue to be good to others. Take care! ~T. Lyn
There were peoe to greet physically like hitting other people, verbally making fun of other people in my high school.
>>When I was in high school, there were people who greeted other by hitting and teasing or making fun of others.
I really hated them so i ignored them.
>>I hated it so much so I just ignored them.
I think these greeting are bullying.
>>I think greeting is bullying.
But young boys don’t know about that exactly and they think friendship is the most important to their lifes.
>>But those young boys didn\'t exactly know about it and I think friendship is the most important thing in their lives at that time.
But important thing is not being hurt by other people physically, psychologically
>>The most important thing to me is not to hurt others physically and psychologically.
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