Greetings and good afternoon dear^^

2015-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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List all the activities that you can do to replenish your strength. Of course, I have some activities to replenish my strength and recover my health^^ I think it is just mine.^^ Of course, it is very easy that you can try easily.^^ Do you want to know what is it?^^ It is just having a good rest and eating a good meal.^^ I think it is best way to recover your health and strength among my ideas and ways.^^ Would you agree with my thought?^^

강사 첨삭

It\'s a great afternoon, Kirk, because of your tips here! I totally agree with your opinion but of course, they should be done in moderation. I will definitely do both of them this coming weekend. Let\'s savor the moment my friend! Thank you very much for keeping up with me this whole week. I will catch you again next week, okay? Study the feedback given and may you find every thing there handy. Keep safe! _Klein List all the activities that you can do to replenish your strength.Of course, I have some activities to replenish my strength and recover my health^^>>Correct OR >> Of course, there are some activities that help me replenish my strength and recover my good health.I think it is just mine.^^>>Correct [I think they (activities) are just mine.]Of course, it is very easy that you can try easily.^^ >>Correct OR >> Of course, it is very easy, so you can try it easily. [Of course, they are very easy, so you can try them.]Do you want to know what is it?^^>>Do you want to know what it is? [Do you want to know what they are?]It is just having a good rest and eating a good meal.^^>>Correct OR >> They are just having a good rest and eating a good meal.I think it is best way to recover your health and strength among my ideas and ways.^^>>I think they (two) are the best ways to recover your health and strength among my ideas and ways.Would you agree with my thought?^^ >>Correct

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