Greetings and good afternoon dear^^
학생이 쓴 원문
List all the activities that you can do to replenish your strength.
Of course, I have some activities to replenish my strength and recover my health^^
I think it is just mine.^^
Of course, it is very easy that you can try easily.^^
Do you want to know what is it?^^
It is just having a good rest and eating a good meal.^^
I think it is best way to recover your health and strength among my ideas and ways.^^
Would you agree with my thought?^^
강사 첨삭
It\'s a great afternoon, Kirk, because of your tips here!
I totally agree with your opinion but of course, they should be done in moderation. I will definitely do both of them this coming weekend.
Let\'s savor the moment my friend!
Thank you very much for keeping up with me this whole week. I will catch you again next week, okay?
Study the feedback given and may you find every thing there handy.
Keep safe!
_Klein
List all the activities that you can do to replenish your strength.Of course, I have some activities to replenish my strength and recover my health^^>>Correct
OR >> Of course, there are some activities that help me replenish my strength and recover my good health.I think it is just mine.^^>>Correct
[I think they (activities) are just mine.]Of course, it is very easy that you can try easily.^^
>>Correct
OR >> Of course, it is very easy, so you can try it easily.
[Of course, they are very easy, so you can try them.]Do you want to know what is it?^^>>Do you want to know what it is?
[Do you want to know what they are?]It is just having a good rest and eating a good meal.^^>>Correct
OR >> They are just having a good rest and eating a good meal.I think it is best way to recover your health and strength among my ideas and ways.^^>>I think they (two) are the best ways to recover your health and strength among my ideas and ways.Would you agree with my thought?^^
>>Correct
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