Grocery Shopping

2010-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I go grocery shopping a couple of times a week. There is an E-Mart located 30 minutes away from my house. I usually go there alone. And I normally buy vegetables and a salad. I don't go there in weekend because it is so crowded then. When I go on shopping , I make a shopping list. Whenever I need something , I write it on the memo in my cell phone. When I am finished , I usually pay with a credid card. So that is how I shop.

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Hello once again my dear [이름]!Its a happy MOnday! Of course, like the usual compositions you had,..very impressive and your writing skill is great!^^ Keep up the good work... Talk to you again later my dear.. T.Cam   I go grocery shopping a couple of times a week. >>correct!There is an E-Mart located 30 minutes away from my house. >>correct!I usually go there alone. >>correct!And I normally buy vegetables and a salad. >>correct!I don't go there in weekend because it is so crowded then. >>correct!When I go on shopping , I make a shopping list. >>correct!Whenever I need something , I write it on the memo in my cell phone. >>correct!When I am finished , I usually pay with a credid card. >>correct!So that is how I shop. >>correct!

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