Grocery Shopping
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I go grocery shopping a couple of times a week.
There is an E-Mart located 30 minutes away from my house.
I usually go there alone.
And I normally buy vegetables and a salad.
I don't go there in weekend because it is so crowded then.
When I go on shopping , I make a shopping list.
Whenever I need something , I write it on the memo in my cell phone.
When I am finished , I usually pay with a credid card.
So that is how I shop.
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I go grocery shopping a couple of times a week.
>>correct!There is an E-Mart located 30 minutes away from my house.
>>correct!I usually go there alone.
>>correct!And I normally buy vegetables and a salad.
>>correct!I don't go there in weekend because it is so crowded then.
>>correct!When I go on shopping , I make a shopping list.
>>correct!Whenever I need something , I write it on the memo in my cell phone.
>>correct!When I am finished , I usually pay with a credid card.
>>correct!So that is how I shop.
>>correct!
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