Growth of private car ownership
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think that the Growth of private car ownership alone is problem. This is a matter of personal freedom. I believe it\'s important private car owners to have ethical attitude by using their car only on nessasary situation for earth\'s envirnment.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]! As we embrace the fun and relaxation that the weekend promises, let\'s also keep in mind the importance of balance! Productivity isn\'t just about work, it\'s also about how well we can rest and take care of ourselves.
Cheers to a fantastic Friday and an even better weekend!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don\'t think that the Growth of private car ownership alone is a problem.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> I don’t think the increase in private car ownership is the main issue.
This is a matter of personal freedom.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
I believe it\'s important private car owners to have ethical attitude by using their car only on nessasary situation for earth\'s envirnment.
>>> I believe it\'s important for private car owners to adopt an ethical attitude by using their cars only when necessary to help protect the environment.
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