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Yesterday, I took my guitar lessons. It's so fun to learn how to play the guitar. I love it!
I want to play the "Romance" But, My teacher said that at first we need 6 months to play the Romance. Oh no! I wanted to play in my class when we have a party.
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Hello Joey,
Good luck with the guitar lessons, I hope you learn as much as possible in the shortest amount of time. Talk to you again tomorrow.
-RJ -
Yesterday, I took my guitar lessons. It's so fun to learn how to play the guitar. I love it!>>correctI want to play the "Romance" But, My teacher said that at first we need 6 months to play the Romance.
>>I want to play the song "Romance." But my teacher said that we first need 6 months to play the guitar.
Oh no! I wanted to play in my class when we have a party.
>>Oh no! I wanted to play in my class for our party.
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