Guns don’t kill people, people do." What do you think of this?
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Thank you for this composition, Sir Sunny!
Yes, I do agree that people should be more responsible for gun possessions. There has been a rapid rate of gun killings and this is something that we should be aware of. Let\'s hope for a better world. See you!
~Teacher Eunice
The statement as proposed is true.
>>> The statement as proposed was true.
guns can\'t pull the trigger by itself, there is always someone that pulls the trigger.
>>> Guns can\'t pull the trigger by itself, there is always someone that pulls it.
This is like saying, \"criminals don\'t rape people\". \"Burglars don\'t commit robbery.\"
>>> This is like saying, \"criminals don\'t rape people, and burglars don\'t commit robbery.\"
Basically, People can\'t kill people if they don\'t have guns.
>>> Basically, people can\'t kill people if they don\'t have guns.
It is kind of word play.
>>> It is kind of a word play.
Guns can\'t work by themselves, they always need humans.
>>> Correct!
I think if there is a law that people can\'t have guns in their country, we don\'t have to worry about the murdering by guns.
>>> I think if there is a law that people can\'t have guns in their country, we don\'t have to worry about gun killings.
I am living in the country which is not allowed to possess guns.
>>> I am living in a country which is not allowed to possess guns.
I don\'t understand why people would like to have it.
>>> Correct!
I guess that they want to protect themselves from the threat.
>>> I guess that they want to protect themselves from threats.
I have seen a lot of accident caused by guns from news and multimedia.
>>> I have seen a lot of accidents caused by guns from news and multimedia.
All victims didn\'t give any damages to assailant, they were just pure victims.
>>> All victims didn\'t give any damages to assailants, they were just pure victims.
We must pray for the life that there is no accidents from the gun accident.
>>> We must pray that there will be no accidents caused by gun killings.
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