Guns don’t kill people, people do." What do you think of this?

2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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The statement as proposed is true. guns can't pull the trigger by itself, there is always someone that pulls the trigger. This is like saying, "criminals don't rape people". "Burglars don't commit robbery." Basically, People can't kill people if they don't have guns. It is kind of word play. Guns can't work by themselves, they always need humans. I think if there is a law that people can't have guns in their country, we don't have to worry about the murdering by guns. I am living in the country which is not allowed to possess guns. I don't understand why people would like to have it. I guess that they want to protect themselves from the threat. I have seen a lot of accident caused by guns from news and multimedia. All victims didn't give any damages to assailant, they were just pure victims. We must pray for the life that there is no accidents from the gun accident.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this composition, Sir Sunny!

Yes, I do agree that people should be more responsible for gun possessions. There has been a rapid rate of gun killings and this is something that we should be aware of. Let\'s hope for a better world. See you!

~Teacher Eunice


The statement as proposed is true.

>>> The statement as proposed was true.

guns can\'t pull the trigger by itself, there is always someone that pulls the trigger.  

>>> Guns can\'t pull the trigger by itself, there is always someone that pulls it.

This is like saying, \"criminals don\'t rape people\". \"Burglars don\'t commit robbery.\"

>>> This is like saying, \"criminals don\'t rape people, and burglars don\'t commit robbery.\" 
Basically, People can\'t kill people if they don\'t have guns.

>>> Basically, people can\'t kill people if they don\'t have guns.

It is kind of word play.

>>> It is kind of a word play.

Guns can\'t work by themselves, they always need humans. 

>>> Correct!

I think if there is a law that people can\'t have guns in their country, we don\'t have to worry about the murdering by guns.
>>>
I think if there is a law that people can\'t have guns in their country, we don\'t have to worry about gun killings.  

I am living in the country which is not allowed to possess guns.
>>>
I am living in a country which is not allowed to possess guns. 

I don\'t understand why people would like to have it.

>>> Correct!

I guess that they want to protect themselves from the threat.

>>> I guess that they want to protect themselves from threats.

I have seen a lot of accident caused by guns from news and multimedia.

>>> I have seen a lot of accidents caused by guns from news and multimedia.  

All victims didn\'t give any damages to assailant, they were just pure victims.

>>> All victims didn\'t give any damages to assailants, they were just pure victims.

We must pray for the life that there is no accidents from the gun accident.

>>> We must pray that there will be no accidents caused by gun killings. 


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