Guns or people, that is the question.

2018-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

The gun itself is neutrial. Important point is how and who uses it. If a robber uses it when he threatens someone, It becomes a killing weapon. If police uses it when a robber tries to kill someone, It becomes a saving weapon. Therefore Guns don\'t kill people, people do.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday, Ms. [이름]!

Well said, I do agree with you! It matters how responsible people should be when handling a gun. Discipline matters. Thank you for sharing this piece with me. Have a smooth sailing day!

~Teacher Eunice

The gun itself is neutrial.
>>> The gun itself is neutral.

Important point is how and who uses it.

>>> The most important point is how and who uses it.
If a robber uses it when he threatens someone, It becomes a killing weapon.
>>> If a robber uses it when he threatens someone, it becomes a killing weapon.

If police uses it when a robber tries to kill someone, It becomes a saving weapon.
>>> If a police uses it when a robber tries to kill someone, it becomes a saving weapon.

Therefore Guns don\'t kill people, people do.

>>> Therefore, guns don\'t kill people, people do.

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