Gyeong-bok gung
학생이 쓴 원문
"Gyeong-bok gung" is the most famous palace in South Korea There are many buildings and Gardens in the palace and some of them are designated as a national treasure.
The palace was originally constructed in 1395 by King Taejo. The name "Gyeong-bok" had the meaning of 'a desire for peaceful reign'. At that time, the location of the palace was considered very good by the divination based on topography. It was destroyed by fire because of the war with Japan in 1592, however, then it was reconstructed in 1865 and it continued up to these days.
I think that "Gyeong-bok gung" is one of the symbol of Korea. It has not only beautiful buildings but also historical values. I love it.
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"Gyeong-bok gung" is the most famous palace in South Korea.>>Correct
There are many buildings and gardens in the palace and some of them are designated as a national treasure.
>>Correct
The name "Gyeong-bok" had the meaning of 'a desire for peaceful reign'.
>>The name "Gyeong-bok" means 'a desire for peaceful reign'.
At that time, the location of the palace was considered very good by the divination based on topography.
>>Correct
It was destroyed by fire because of the war with Japan in 1592, however, then it was reconstructed in 1865 and it continued up to these days.
>> It was destroyed by fire because of the war with Japan in 1592 however, it was reconstructed in 1865 and it continued up to these days.
>> It was destroyed by fire because of the war with Japan in 1592 then it was reconstructed in 1865 and it continued up to these days.
I think that "Gyeong-bok gung" is one of the symbol of Korea.
>>Correct
It has not only beautiful buildings but also historical values.
>>Correct
I love it.
>>Correct
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