Gyeong-ju trip
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I went Gyeong-ju on weekend. I saw the Cheon-ma-do. The cheon-ma-do is old picture about hourse. And I ate bul-go-gi and drank hot choco.It was very fun.
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I went Gyeong-ju on weekend.
>> I went to Gyeongju on weekend.
I saw the Cheon-ma-do.
>> I saw the Cheonmado.
The cheon-ma-do is old picture about house.
>> The Cheonmado is an old picture of a horse.
OR>> The Cheonmado is an ancient painting of a horse.
And I ate bul-go-gi and drank hot choco.
>> And I ate bulgogi and drank hot chocolate.
It was very fun.
>> CORRECT!
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