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Thanks, Se [이름]!
That’s a good insight! You can always count on your parents and siblings for help and love. Family is very valuable and important and should never be taken for granted. A family is where we all start our life journey and helps us grow to be successful throughout our lives.
-Kristine ^^
Are you a happy person?
>> Correct.
I think I\'m happy person because I have a good
family and friends.
>> I believe that having a supportive family and friends makes me a happy person.
And we don\'t have any serious probleme without my school.
>> We don’t have any serious problems except for my schoolwork.
So I think I\'m an happy person.
>> Correct.
Or >> Therefore,
I believe I\'m a happy person.
What usually makes you happy?
>> Correct.
There are a lot of activites that makes me happy,
but nowadays, when I play Judo, it makes me feel very happpy.
>> There are many things that makes me happy, but nowadays, Judo brings me the most.
Because I play Judo with my friends.
>> Because my friends and I do Judo together.
It\'s little bit tired but it\'s fun.
>> It’s a bit tiring but it\'s still fun.
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