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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
We need to smile and laugh all the time because it can really make us feel good.
In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.
I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.
Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.
T.Jeny
laugh is very important in our life.
>>Laughter is very important in our life.
because laughter can make our happy.
>>Because laughter can make us happy.
all people want to the happy.
>>We all want to be happy.
but so many people don\'t know that.
>>But many people don\'t know how to be happy.
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