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Yesterday our family whatched
Avengers movie. But we whatched
Thor . because we already whatched Avengers and eventually we saw that last scene
many people death to tanos.
My emotion is next time thor carful the tanos and l wan\'t they go to earth . next time we whatched Avengers and i wish Avengers became good hero.
2019.2.18 monday sunny~^^♡
Thank you T.elisha
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for telling me the things you did the other day. See you later! ~
-Teacher Elisha
Yesterday our family whatched
Avengers movie.
>> Our family watched Avengers yesterday.
But we whatched
Thor .
>> We watched Thor. (Please write WATCH this way instead.)
because we already whatched Avengers and eventually we saw that last scene
many people death to tanos.
>> We have already watched Avengers and we saw the last scene wherein many people died because of Thanos.
My emotion is next time thor carful the tanos and l wan\'t they go to earth .
>> I am hoping that the next time Thor and Thanos go to Earth, they\'ll be more careful.
next time we whatched Avengers and i wish Avengers became good hero.
>> I hope that in the next Avengers movie, they become good heroes.
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