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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Wow! You are a really smart girl.
Aside from speaking in English well, you can now speak in Chinese too!
Great job! See you!
~Teacher Elisha
Title:china teacher
>> Title: Chinese Teacher (China is the name of the country. But, if we\'re talking about a person from China or their language, we say Chinese.)
6:oopm I learned chinese today.
>> At 6 o\'clock in the evening, I learned Chinese.
I start Chinese today.
>> I started learning Chinese today.
And i learned Chinese Word, for example rabbit,
Mom,dad,yes,no and so on.
>> I learned how to say a few Chinese words like rabbit, mom, dad, yes, no and so on.
And I already learn that before
and is very easy to me.
>> I\'ve learned those before that is why it was very easy for me.
Our teacher
give me assignments .
>> Our teacher gave me assignments.
And I did it after class.
>> correct!
I am so happy if i study harder than ever i will be best student who speak chinese well.
>> I am so happy because if I study harder than ever, I will be the best student who speaks Chinese well.
Next time at class i will do my best.
>> correct!
or:
>> I will do my best on our next class.
2019.2.19 tuesday rainny with snow
>> Today is Tuesday. It is raining and snowing.
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