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2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

Title:china teacher 6:oopm I learned chinese today. I start Chinese today. And i learned Chinese Word, for example rabbit, Mom,dad,yes,no and so on. And I already learn that before and is very easy to me. Our teacher give me assignments . And I did it after class. I am so happy if i study harder than ever i will be best student who speak chinese well. Next time at class i will do my best.i love you T.elisha thank you To check me [이름] writing. 2019.2.19 tuesday rainny with snow

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Wow! You are a really smart girl.

Aside from speaking in English well, you can now speak in Chinese too!

Great job! See you!

~Teacher Elisha

Title:china teacher

>> Title: Chinese Teacher (China is the name of the country. But, if we\'re talking about a person from China or their language, we say Chinese.)
 6:oopm I learned chinese today.

>> At 6 o\'clock in the evening, I learned Chinese.
 I start Chinese today.

>> I started learning Chinese today.

And i learned Chinese Word, for example rabbit,
Mom,dad,yes,no and so on.

>> I learned how to say a few Chinese words like rabbit, mom, dad, yes, no and so on.
 And I already learn that before
and is very easy to me.

>> I\'ve learned those before that is why it was very easy for me.

 Our teacher
give me assignments .

>> Our teacher gave me assignments.

 And I did it after class.

>> correct!

 I am so happy if i study harder than ever i will be best student who speak chinese well.

>> I am so happy  because if I study harder than ever, I will be the best student who speaks Chinese well.

Next time at class i will do my best.

>> correct!

or:

>> I will do my best on our next class.
 2019.2.19 tuesday rainny with snow

>> Today is Tuesday. It is raining and snowing.

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